what
May 21, 2014 at 6:14 pm
I think Couture's critiquing points are valid though I may have to add that the biggest thing that stands out to me is the lack of eyebrows.
Tobias
May 24, 2014 at 3:36 pm
I tried on eyebrows but they were invisible with the hair :) I found a pair that does show for my on-site version. Thanks for the crit!
Libra
May 20, 2014 at 6:21 pm
My crit:
1.The top you are using (red one) layers awkwardly with those shorts. Maybe try a different red top, or try layering the shorts over the top if that works.
2. Needs a necklace, accessories are important. There are plenty of accessories on site that would compliment this ha well. Also adding a ring wouldn't hurt either.
3. The headpiece doesn't match anything. THough the headpiece is cute, its bright red, where as the top is dark red. Also it has polka dots. I would remove it, or change the red top to match it.