May 20, 2014 at 6:25 pm
Crit:
1. The face needs work. I think this needs different lips, and less eye shadow.
2. The dark pink on the blazer i wish was incorporated more into the ha.
3. This is almost TOO simple as well. I wish it had more going on, like a belt to really make it stand out.
Maritime
May 20, 2014 at 8:03 pm
Thanks for the feedback! What do you think about these revised versions?
1. I changed up the makeup and the lips, and you're right, it does look better.
2. I changed up the shoes to bring in some of the darker pink, and in the second revised version I changed up some accessories to bring it in, as well.
3. I have a hard time making simple HAs, actually; it's something that I've been trying to practice! I deliberately left a belt off of this HA because I wanted the white of the underskirt to act as a belt-without-a-buckle and to pick up on some of the brighter points on the jacket, but I guess that failed lol. Do you think that the belt I added in works? I didn't want to add anything gold to the palette, so some of my go-to belts were out. Is there another belt you think would work here?
Libra
May 20, 2014 at 8:37 pm
yes I THINK It is a lot better now! I like # 2 with the pink bracelet the best.
1. The face is much nicer now!Just changing that made a world of difference.
2. The darker shoes match the jacket better.
3. The belt and accessoriea are perfect!
The only thing i can see that is a tiny bit off is the earring which i orange. Maybe go with the earrings from ha # 1. Other than that one little thing way to go!!! <3