what
April 3, 2014 at 10:18 pm
I think what's bothering me is the crotch area, where it's a bit green. idk what happened there but i dont wanna find out 'naw mean???
Iydelle
April 4, 2014 at 1:40 pm
XD I honestly just noticed the green.
I really don't blame you for not wanting to know what's happened. I dunno what she's been up to.... O.O
concerto
April 2, 2014 at 7:28 pm
Hope you don't mind me critiquing!
I think the main problem is just to make sure all the item styles match. The hairpiece and sash (earthy) don't go well with the boots (casual) and hair (a little bit edgy).
The jacket is also a bit chunky looking, especially compared to the other thin-lined items and I'm not crazy about the belt layered over the jacket.
I'd also suggest adding more to the face, with lips (maybe Mocha) and makeup, especially since the mascara you used has a lot of potential for eyeshadows to be layered behind it.
Overall though your color matching is good and I really like your choice of color palette! c:
Iydelle
April 3, 2014 at 4:50 pm
Thank you very much for taking the time to critique. It is always appreciated. C:
I am greatly for the comments you have left and will take them into consideration when either remaking this outfit (which I think I might do in the near future :P) or creating a new one all together.