EmCee
March 14, 2014 at 10:29 am

I really like this, but I think the thing that strikes me as odd is the pants. I think if you axed the pants, this would be absolutely gorgeous. I think the black tutu would have served greatly under the dress if you were going for some color blocking. Or maybe a pair of the buttoned leggings layered with some stockings to give a stark black like the hair.

A neutral colored lip would have worked greatly as well, because this avatar strikes me very feminine.

Congrats on your newest upload though! I hope you continue. c:

bath
March 15, 2014 at 11:16 pm

hi! c: thank you so much for the critique!!
I took off the pants as you suggested and I think I like it much better! do you have any neutral lip items you would suggest?

EmCee
March 16, 2014 at 12:43 pm

Delish has a wonderful neutral lip but the same escapes me. Not the delish tea but the other ones.