Karissa
March 12, 2014 at 10:39 pm

You did an awesome job with this! I really like it my main problem in my opinion was the hair, I felt like the color stuck out too much and I didn't even realize you made it to match the shoes. I feel like it was so small that you could have even done away with not using that color at all. Besides that I really love the rest and how you made the details in the chest pop. Awesome job with the jacket!

ARA
March 23, 2014 at 11:19 pm

Thanks <3 I was trying not to use a CW in this one (since it was going to be my no sheer for my CHIC app) but that was a bit of a bad call, I guess. I fixed the hair and changed the shoes! You can see the new one in the description (;

EmCee
March 12, 2014 at 2:40 pm

I'm glad you worked on this again!
I do think the coloring in the hair is a bit flat but I lovelovelove the chest area as well.

ARA
March 12, 2014 at 10:28 pm

I kind of flailed around with the hair and ended up settling on what it is now without ever really fixing it :/ Shame on me!

Christopher
March 12, 2014 at 2:06 pm

I've seen this jacket used like a million times with that corset but you still made it look good with the tattoos and the sparkle bra adding some detailing. I actually really like the way you’ve left the legs bare and concentrated everything In the chest area. I’m not fond of the shoe choice, however, as the colors seem off, and the hair color is the only place the shoe sole color is matched. The mouth also sticks out a bit from under the lipstick.

Also this is more personal preference but I hate that nose.