Blaze
October 25, 2013 at 8:25 pm

I hope you don't mind if I give a bit of crit for this?

I love the outfit SO MUCH, and I think the style as a whole could benefit from different face choices. The makeup around the eyes make them seem kind of blurry and crooked, for such a simple style less is more. Also, the lips don't seem to layer perfectly over the default mouth you have on, you might want to try putting on the lilpout beneath the lipstick.

Lastly, a ring could help tie in either the pink or the brown, whichever you find. :)

Again, I hope you don't mind. I really do love the outfit a lot, I never would have guessed you had that bodysuit on! It matches the ribbon so well the way you have it layered.

Valor
October 31, 2013 at 9:31 am

Thank you for the advice the compliments- it took me a while to figure out how to make some legwear match that headband, which was the whole inspiration for the piece

I'm definitely going to look in to matching up a ring to the pink or her shirt, and I see what you mean with the layering of the mouth and I've been looking for eye makeup alternatives to widen and brighten up her face.

I'm welcome to any constructive advice you guys are willing to give!
=3