soph
April 15, 2013 at 11:15 am

Hey! Critique wise, I felt like this avatar was a little unbalanced light/dark wise, with large dark areas in the head and feet and not quite enough in the middle to counter it. The texture on the hose also feels like it's a little too much, and they might have worked better plainer? I love how you matched the shorts, cuffs and collar (some of that colour might have been great as a hair accessory!) and the shoes go great with your hair. Hope this helps somewhat (:

Iydelle
April 15, 2013 at 1:53 pm

Thanks for the constructive feedback, I shall take it on board when making my next HA. Much appreciated :)

catnip
April 14, 2013 at 8:46 am

i really adore the hair, except for the weird tiny pale line where the wig connects with the bun, but im just nit-picky like that. :'D also, nice use of those asdfghjkl bulky shoes! <3

Iydelle
April 14, 2013 at 10:19 am

Thanks for the comments, and I see what you mean with the hair. I did try to get rid of it when in the salon, but it was persistent that it was going to stay. So I gave up fighting and left it. XD

catnip
April 14, 2013 at 10:23 am

ohhh i thought it was a random streak that was left there hahaha. xD but other than that, this is a really cute outfit! o3o