old_Ophelia
December 6, 2009 at 3:16 pm

Nice use of that makeup kit, and the rainyday frost slip-thing definitely looks nice with the ragged white dress.

However, I'd definitely remove the rug (it's unnecessary, and doesn't fit your theme). I'd lose the hairbow for the same reason.

lil_dragon
December 6, 2009 at 4:21 pm

thank you for your time and the advice. I have made some changes and will revise this HA.