Ollie
September 20, 2010 at 7:07 pm

Uhm. If I were you, I'd layer the hair behind all the rest, because it's just so big and BAM(f?) and etc.

other than that, really nice. That shade of light blue is just lovely--I especially adore how it meshes with the rainyday makeup.

Out of curiosity, what were you going to do with the whiteout?

Anyway, kudos!

Narnia
September 20, 2010 at 7:15 pm

thanks for the critique! ^^;

with the whiteout, I originally used the Oracle dress (that real cheap one) and the legs had a cool design from it and the top mached well, but I think it actually turned out better this way