old_princess
June 1, 2010 at 4:52 am

Did you layer another wig under the Gemini hairpiece, or is it salon hair? It looks really nice.

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Semen
June 1, 2010 at 1:51 am

I really like this. I love the colors, and the way you used that new wig is fantastic. I'm especially liking how you have the red gem/button thing from the corset sticking out, even if it doesn't match anything. I love how the jagged edges from that headpiece mimic the bodice, too.
The head is perfect imo.

One of the things I'm not too keen on is the over-use of patterns. The stripes and ruffles in the corset, crosshatch in the bodice, floral pattern of the tattoo, and spirals of the hair are a little off-putting when they're all together.
And personally, I don't think you need black in this avatar, either. It's only in two areas and doesn't do much to bring anything out. Since the avatar is so dark, try a slightly lighter color- gray, perhaps- to help break up the large areas of creamy gold & brown?
The arms seem a bit bare, so I'd add a bracelet or ring.

But all-in-all, I really, really like this avatar. Great work. =)