Barbie
February 29, 2016 at 5:22 pm
also cause you asked for critique:
the sleeves are a little bunky on such a soft looking HA
the corset sits quite low over the skirt and looks a little off/droopy. i think it would be better if you used a different skirt around the waist area and using a belt. or trying out the ____ lace panties underneath. layering a couple of them makes it more opaque and less ~risqué~
the shoe layering could be more smooth and personal preference but i think it would also look better with flats and maybe one of those pearl anklets ^^
also, a lot of people look past this but adding a little jewelry (in this case a ring) really makes the HA look complete
overall, this is pretty good! a little tweaking and it's perf c:
old_Song
February 29, 2016 at 6:40 pm
Thank you! And yes, it's Astute, layered over Aqua. :)
And thank you so much for all the critique! This one was rushed (as the last few have been) because I just super wanted to play with the hair. I noticed the bit on the feet, especially. I'm not happy with how they look either. I was hoping the New Dress looked like a layer/tier over the Lace Dress, but it was certainly a lazy attempt, I agree. I actually love rings and belts! I have no excuses for not using them this time. I was just super lazy and it shows. ;_;
Having said that, I'm also pretty new to doing skirt/dress/shorts HAs, and this critique is very valuable to me - I can use all of it that I can get, thank you so much!
Barbie
February 29, 2016 at 8:27 pm
ohhh what a pretty combination O: <3 i'm gonna have to get both now. i'm already after astute P:
ah, i totally get the rushing thing because you're so excited to use a new wear ahaha. i've done the same thing before.
i see what you were trying to accomplish with the dress now ^^ glad you see where i'm coming from with the skirt.
and that's alright about the jewelry~ i forget to throw some on sometimes lol.
you're very welcome! probably a bit of an exaggeration (too lazy to browse my s-f), but i think i could count on one hand how many times my HA has worn pants xD i get so stumped with them and think they end up looking weird because i'm not used to it lol