ButterflyQueen
June 10, 2014 at 11:42 am

The shoes are too bulky for this ha.
I agree with Thelovelyzero, and that you should have something that is also bulky to even it out.
What Couture said said is also true, and it slightly bothers me that there is blue in the necklace, but nowhere else in the ha. If the socks were a darker shade of red, then they would look perfect.
Other than those small details, I think this outfit is amazing and I defiantly give it a 5-star rating! :)

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Thelovelyzero
June 7, 2014 at 2:26 am

I don't think the shoes would be too bulky if you added an oversized black hair bow or something to bulk up the head and balance it out but I had to comment because the second I saw that skirt I wanted to make an outfit out of it and you rocked this one!

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Libra
June 3, 2014 at 5:24 pm

Crit:

The shoes are too bulky for this ha. The ankle socks are a lot brighter than the hair, and more orange compared to the skirt. There is blue in the necklace but know where else in the ha.