Libra
May 20, 2014 at 6:18 pm

My crit:

1. Needs some sort of shorts underneith the slip. I personally am a huge fan of this slip, but even tho it covers the "hooha" area it still needs some sort of shorts underneith.

2. The eyeshadow is too dark for a ha so soft. I would take the dark eyeliner you used off and maybe pick new eyes all together.

3. Shoes are outdated I agree with ara, tho sometimes they are ok, i don't think they fit the theme of this ha. Maybe try the low heels, or some other type of shoe.

4. This needs lips.

5. I like the hair, but it has an awkward hair line. I would either add some sort of hair piece or choose new hair all together.

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ARA
May 17, 2014 at 12:41 am

Hey there! I love your use of the gauze arm pieces and the lotus slip! They match so well :O Did you layer anything under the lotus slip? I used it once or twice before and I remember it being super sheer, but I honestly can't tell with this HA (x
Oh, and for your critique! I find that those flats are a bit outdated. They also aren't exactly spot on in terms of color. Shoes are the bane of my existence, but if at all possible I would recommend taking a second look at your options.