Luscious
March 2, 2013 at 5:32 pm

First let me say I love this overall. I have a few little ideas for it, though.

Personally, I would add a ring and probably use a different bracelet, something thicker and lower on the arm. You could maybe even use two bracelets, one silver, one black, to add more silver to the avatar. I would try different default eyes, too, I think maybe Dee would make the eye layering look less awkward? One eye just looks wider than the other. (I know bases are 3/4 view, but still...imo anyways.)

I love the overall theme and your use of those lips is a great addition/idea because they're not lost under the collar and the shape is still noticeable.

Blaze
March 13, 2013 at 3:35 pm

I realize I'm super late replying to this, but indulge me haha.

I actually tried so many bracelet things. The best was the flashback ones, with the silver and black, but it really just made the HA look too cluttered and bulky around the wrists for my liking.

I did change the eyes, though! It was something I meant to do as I was building the avatar but just got lost by the wayside. Dee eyes helped with the character of the avatar, too, not just shape so yay

Thanks for the compliments on the theme and the specific things you pointed out :) I always appreciate your feedback, especially since I love your styles.

Luscious
March 13, 2013 at 4:02 pm

You're welcome! <33