landriona
April 22, 2012 at 10:18 am

Your face is adorable. It's what drew me in! Then I saw the bodice and lingerie layering. So clever. With all the detail in the bodice, though, the lace leggings seem to be overkill. Something the same shade without designs (or maybe even less tight detail) would have been better. Also, the candy corn bloomers were a neat addition. Unfortunately, they stick out of the lingerie, right over the hand, on one side. I would have liked to see gloves to make that seem intentional. Lastly, the shoes would have been better if they were flat out white or black. While the style is great, the color just detracts from the cohesiveness.

old_Song
April 22, 2012 at 12:32 pm

Thank you very much for the critique! :) This one was a little rushed because I only had about an hour before my next transition, but I'll definitely keep those tips in mind for future avatars!

landriona
April 22, 2012 at 12:52 pm

You're welcome! I totally understand about the time limit, though. I'm not sure that I'd be able to truly commit to a one hour turnaround, myself. So, congrats on that! :o