ROBOT
November 16, 2009 at 10:42 pm

I would swap the rainyday and blue item on the arm for a cream/light gold colored bracelet that matches the skirt. I love the layering of the suspenders/shorts. Very clever.

ROBOT
November 16, 2009 at 10:46 pm

Also I forgot to add that you can try pming grace with the updated version, but it sounds like the team is pretty busy working in some changes based on all the suggestions the site's been getting. She might be able to update your style though. If not you can always upload the new version. C:

DevilsAngelKia
November 19, 2009 at 7:40 pm

Thanks ROBOT, I would have replied to your critique in the critiques section of CHIC but I guess we can't do that any more. I had kinda wanted to update this one and add in a different one that got missed. Any suggestions for cream items I could put on the neck area?

Sin
November 16, 2009 at 9:24 pm

Clever trick you pulled there with the suspenders - looks like you layered a pair of those cute lil' suspendered shorts over them and it works well. Anywho, it's a nicely subtle detail and pretty smart.

Baby
November 16, 2009 at 9:13 pm

I'm not really a fan of any of the arm items on here- the watch doesn't match the blues you have though so that one should definitely go. And the rainyday item just clutters it up so I'd get rid of that too. The pumpkin bracelet I'd say you don't really NEED, but it is good to have something on your arm so that one doesn't really bother me. Overall I just think it needs more flair- right now there isn't really much wrong with it, it's just a bit boring.