old_Ophelia
June 8, 2010 at 11:41 am

If I pretend that the zombie isn't there (I know you're doing it for the achievement, bla bla bla, I still think you should just get rid of it), I'd say the owl, cute as he is, is in the way of your color scheme.

Also, that headband layers a bit oddly with your choice of hair; something like braids or hime or one of the short styles would work better.

But yes, as I told you before, you're definitely improving.